Tanka poems

Tanka poems are like cinquain poems but they  have more syllables, similes, metaphor's and personification.
This is my one

Putikitiki

(5 syllables)   Putikitiki

(7 syllables)  Running on the cold playground

(5 syllables) Surrounded by trees 

(7 syllables)  Leaves are like galloping horses

(7 syllables)  Trees are as still as statues