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Wednesday, 6 September 2017

Picture writing



Picture writing
We have been learning how to use a picture and write about it.
Walking to school in the icy snow is quite a challenge for us; Dads are carrying our packs for us and the older kids have to carry their own pack for the whole 3.4km. Im starting to  get scared. Im lucky I don’t need to carry my own pack ‘cuz im too young i'm 9 years old on my tenth birthday i’ll regret wanting to grow up. My dads pack is 19.7kg i’m 20kg I can’t even carry that. But this is the big question: What if we fall down a crack? Who will save us...


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Scrambling up the ladder, 3 go up at once, the ladders are not stable. We scramble up the ladders trying not to be late for class. Each ladder is over 3m high. “How are we supposed to climb up?” I say to myself. “This is my first try everyone else has been doing this for years” I say again to myself

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ava I love your writing.In the snow one I loved how you added in a question I also loved how you added in a bit of cheekiness
    Kaya

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